Comments:

mindquill - 2003-08-04 16:41:20
Very sad, very touching. I liked it. It gave me a warm fuzzy, and usually when things try to give me a warm fuzzy, I just moan and say something like "how cheesy!" But I really like your writing, it was not emotionally manipulative, just touching. Well done.
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Erika - 2003-08-04 16:54:09
I have the chills. I wish you would hurry up and archive all of these, so I can read through all of them.
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dinguspie - 2003-08-04 17:11:56
this was nice.
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Ellen - 2003-08-04 19:57:12
*tears* That was beautiful.
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lillie - 2003-08-04 19:57:31
awwwwwwwww. i love your stories.
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Kerbang - 2003-08-04 19:59:57
I have an unprovoked disgust for geese. I don't know why, I just don't like them.
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cloud - 2003-08-05 06:58:04
it was very touching. you write very well. (^o^)
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Vickie - 2003-08-05 11:35:02
Very beautiful...
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darkartist - 2003-08-05 12:07:38
that was unusualy touching, as it takes a good long, 436 page book to really get to me, but that hit it on the dime...
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Marie - 2003-08-05 21:01:46
Damn, dude. Just DAMN.
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sharon - 2003-08-06 01:32:27
please don't take this as insult, but are all these love stories going to end up in death? Can you make a love story about me and can I be the one to die? Since, you know, I would probably live vicariously through this story (and this story would probably have more action than I)
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Gumphood - 2003-08-06 01:49:59
The last one ended in death. This one began with death. Its about dealing with death. The last one is about watching someone you love die. Maybe I will write about you, but I doubt it. I want these to be fictional.
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